Early morning’s spectral breath crept through the open window. In its wake, a shudder rippled throughout the thistle-embroidered lace. As the icy phantom touch swept across the girl’s sleeping form, she startled awake with a gasp.
Eyes wide beneath disheveled dark red locks, she whispered, “I could’ve reached out and scaled it bit by bit.”
The young woman beside her stirred and rose, concern written on her forehead. “What is it?”
Montana shook her head as if to dislodge some troubling thing stuck within before turning her gaze to the deep chocolate eyes that mirrored her own.
“It was a dream, I suppose. But it was … there.” She stretched a shaking hand toward something just out of her reach … and her sister’s vision. As she gazed ahead to a lingering image, a reddish glow surrounded her and music overflowed from somewhere within her.
Marin stood to watch as Montana sang an other-worldly tune, soft and low at first but rising to a warming crescendo.
I close my eyes
And deep within
I feel a song arise.
The earth will swell
And reach and raise,
Forms where my heart will dwell.
My eyes fly wide
To quickly scale
New-birthed mount, my own pride.
Deep in my chest
I feel the tug
From within, I am pressed.
My heart runs free
Away it soars
To be chased or let flee.
The crimson glow surrounding Montana slowly receded, back into its home realm. With the last of its lingering notes caressing the corners of the air around the sisters, the magic vanished. In its place remained its most tangible memory—a warming veil around them.
Montana’s breathing evened out as she blinked away the scene she’d witnessed. Turning to Marin, she held a thousand questions in her eyes.
“Baby Sister, you’ve been called to your piece of nature. Always will the mountains claim your heart. Your choice awaits. Accept and become Mountain Shepherdess. Deny … and forever relinquish your heart.”
“Heart Within the Mountain” Copyright © 2018 by Joy E. Rancatore. All Rights Reserved.
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